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Created By: Gideon Egbuchulam

Written By: Jaden Zotigh

Created By: Gideon Egbuchulam

Written By: Jaden Zotigh

Issue 3: A New Root 

 

Page 1

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Panel One

Description Box: Anchorage City

Anchorage City is shown crashing down to Planet Shoal

 

Panel Two

Kytt is shown running through Anchorage City as the city collapses around her

 

Panel Three

Kytt trips and falls to the ground

 

Panel Four

She turns herself over, looking frightened
 

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Page 2

 

Panel One

Kytt is shown laying on the ground as a building appears to be falling straight towards her.

 

Panel Two

Brail is shown leaping towards her heroically

 

Panel Three

Brail is shown saving Kytt from the collapsing building

 

Page 3

 

Panel One

Brail is shown helping Kytt up

 

Kytt: Brail? 


 

Panel Two

Brail is shown running away through rubble, Kytt chases after

 

Kytt: Slow down!

 

Panel Three

Brail climbs up a tall ledge and Kytt is shown approaching the ledge

 

Panel Four

Brail turns around, offering his hand

 

Panel Five

Kytt takes his hand and he starts pulling her up


 

Page 4

 

Panel One

Brail pulls Kytt up

 

Brail: Come on! I gotcha! 

Kytt: Pull me up before I fall!

Brail: Don't be so scared

 

Panel Two

Kytt is shown standing directly in front of Brail. Both of them are looking at each other.

 

Brail: See, that wasn't so bad

Kytt: Yeah! The climb wasn't bad at all. It was you who was the problem!
 

Panel Three

Kytt looks around and the destruction of Anchorage City is gone. They are standing at the edge of a cliff in the same setting they were at in Issue 1. There is smoke in the distance behind them.


 

Page 5

 

Panel One

Kytt looks around confused 

 

Kytt: Wait, where are we?

 

Panel Two

Kytt looks back to Brail who is now in now a Quasar, towering over her

 

Panel Three

Kytt stares in terror

 

Kytt: Brail?

Brail: Yeah, Kytt. Don’t you worry! I told you, I got this!


 

Page 6

Entire Page is dedicated to Quasar Brail stomping Kytt


 

Page 7

Kytt wakes up, concerned, scared, trying to gather her thoughts in a storm of confusion. She looks terrified and sits alone gathering her thoughts.


 

Page 8

 

Panel One

The Matriarch is shown walking in.
 

Panel Two

The Matriarch makes her way to Kytts bedside

 

Matriarch: I figured I would find you here. 

Kytt: I don’t wanna hear it

 

Panel Three

The Matriarch walks to a compartment on the wall

 

Matriarch: You can’t keep disappearing like this.

Kytt: And you can’t play hero forever

 

Panel Four

The Matriarch opens the compartment on the wall

 

Matriarch: I don’t consider myself a hero

Kytt: I’m sorry. I’m just… tired…


 

Page 9

 

Panel One

Kytt is shown standing up, holding her blanket to cover herself. The Matriarch is shown reaching into the compartment.

 

Matriarch: Where do you go when you’re here?

Kytt: I think you just answered your own question

 

Panel Two

The Matriarch is shown holding Kytts shirt and pants in her hands

 

Matriarch: Not when you’re physically here

 

Panel Three

The Matriarch holds the clothes in one hand and points at Kytts head with the other

 

Matriarch: When you’re here.


 

Panel Four

Kytt thinks for a moment

 

Kytt: Are you going to hand me my clothes?


 

Page 10

 

Panel One

The Matriarch looks down in disappointment while handing Kytt the clothes. Kytt drops the blanket from around herself

 

Panel Two

Kytt quickly begins getting dressed, and the Matriarch walks outside

 

Panel Three

Kytt finishes putting her shirt on and picks up her jacket

 

Panel Four

Kytt joins the Matriarch outside, as she puts her bomber jacket on.


 

Page 11

Entire Page dedicated to showing Kytt and the Matriarch standing in the middle of the Garden.

 

Description Box: Planet Shoal, also known as The Garden, 3 Years after the fall of Anchorage City


 

Page 12

 

Panel One 

The Matriarch and Kytt get on a hoverbike
 

Panel Two

They’re shown shooting off through The Garden

 

Kytt: Why’d you come?

Matriarch: It’s Loyal again.

 

Panel Three

They’re shown exiting The Garden and shooting down a path leading directly into a forest

 

Kytt: When is it not?

Matriarch: She deserves more than that

Kytt: We all do.


 

Page 13

 

Panel One

An unseen man throws a giant blaster at Pilate

 

Description Box: Ara, The Medanites Base

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Man: Numbers?

Pilate: 14921776!

 

Panel Two

Pilate is staring straight, not making eye contact at the man

 

Man: Congratulations, you’re ranking up today. You’re now a rank nine

Pilate: Sir, there must be a mistake, I am only rank 4

 

Panel Three

The man gets down in Pilates face, still not revealing his face. Pilate still stares straight, avoiding looking at him.

 

Man: Did you just call me a liar?

Pilate: No Sir!

Man: Then congratulations! Get your ass to planet Shoal now!

 

Panel Four

Pilate is still staring straight, and the man gets out of his face, handing him a document

 

Pilate: Permission to use Jerhoot, Sir?

Man: You’re a higher rank than I am! You decide that for yourself, Captain!

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Page 14

 

Panel One

Pilate takes the document and looks at it for a moment. 

 

Panel Two

He leaves from the formation and starts down the hall

 

Panel Three

Pilate then gets to a door and pushes a button

 

Panel Four

The doors start to open with smoke coming out


 

Page 15 

The entire page shows the doors open wide, revealing Jehroot, Pilates Quasar


 

Page 16

 

Panel One

Description Box: Back on Shoal

 

Panel Two

Kytt and the Matriarch are getting off of the motorbikes. The Heretics are starting to surround them.

 

Kytt: Calm down! It’s just us!

Matriarch: Where is she?

A Heretic: She’s inside your keeping 

 

Panel Three

Kytt and the Matriarch make their way through the Heretic people. They seem to be giving dirty looks to Kytt. Kytt seems unbothered by the looks.

 

Panel Four

Kytt and the Matriarch are shown entering a hut


 

Page 17

 

Panel One

Loyal is shown shuffling through the compartments around the hut.

 

Matriarch: How many times are we going to go through this Loyal?

 

Panel Two

Loyal looks shocked as she turns and sees the Matriarch and Kytt

 

Loyal: Uhh--

Kytt: Do me a favor and just don’t come back, because next time I’ll kill you.

 

Panel Three

The Matriarch looks pissed at Kytt

 

Matriarch: No! Kytt is not going to kill you! We just want to help

Loyal: You can’t help! You don’t feel it, do you?

 

Panel Four

Matriarch looks like she’s calming Loyal down

 

Matriarch: Feel what?

Loyal: It screams. Rahmus feels it. She hears it too.

Kytt: What does this have to do with Rahmus?

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Page 18

 

Panel One

Kytt looks furious and Loyal looks shocked

 

Loyal: I’ve said too much!

Kytt: No, you haven’t said enough! What do you have to do with Rahmus?

 

Panel Two

A Heretic Bursts into the hut panicked. Kytt and the Matriarch look scared.

 

Heretic: QUASAR INCOMING!!!

 

Panel Three

Loyal throws a smoke bomb or something at the ground, filling the room with smoke

 

Panel Four

The Matriarch, Kytt and the Heretic make their way out of the hut as smoke pours out of the doorway and windows.


 

Page 19

 

Panel One

Loyal is shown jumping out of a window.

 

Panel Two

Kytt raises her blaster at Loyal as Loyal gets up

 

Panel Three

The Matriarch grabs Kytts arms, pushing her arm, causing her to fire the weapon blindly at nothing. Loyal is shown running away.

 

Matriarch: No! 
 

Panel Four:

Kytt looks mad at the Matriarch

 

Kytt: She’s getting away!

Matriarch: She deserves a chance, same as you!


 

Page 20

Taking up the entire page, Jehroot is shown landing in the Heretic base, with everyone running in every direction, frightened. 


 

Page 21

 

Panel One

Jehroot opens up and Pilate jumps out with his blaster in hand

 

Pilate: Everyone stand back!

 

Panel Two

The Matriarch looks with Kytt from a distance, almost unconcerned

 

Matriarch: He’s just a kid

Kytt: Medanites wanna fight us with kids? This is just insulting

 

Panel Three

Kytt shoots at Pilate, blasting his gun right from his hand

 

Panel Four 

Kytt walks to Pilate unconcerned. Pilate looks frightened as he scrambles on the ground.


 

Page 22

Entire page dedicated to Kytt standing over Pilate with her foot on his chest, keeping him on the ground


Kytt: You’re going to give me answers damn near yesterday, before I lose my patience with you!

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To be continued in

Issue 4: When Things Fall Apart

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